Assignment: Compare and Contrast 2 people you know, come up with consistent points of contrast and compose a 3 page paper.
THE TWO FRIENDS
Everyone has friends, and usually they are people from all walks of life. Some are so different personalities. But some are similar that it is shocking. They seem to walk, talk and even eat the same. Others are so very different that it is absolute wonder that they can even stand each other, let alone be friends. That is how Matt and Tuan started out as best friends, but the two good friends found living together a bigger task than they had ever imagines. They are older than me, but they loved to spend times with me having fun, enjoying, studying together and telling jokes. They differ in everything from their appearances, their views on cleaning, their views on sports, their views on fun, and their views on religion.
Matt and Tuan are different in their looks. Matt is five feet-eleven inches tall and weighs 165 pounds. He has dark blonde hair those straights up as spiky and big blue eyes that compliment his white skin. He has a natural look that manly enough to catch the attention of others. For example, while walking through the mall, it is almost inevitable some young girls will try to catch his eye, make a pass, or try to get close to him. On the other hand, Tuan's appearance is totally opposite. He is five feet-four inches tall and weighs 110 pounds. He has long black hair and almost touches the shoulder. His eyes are narrow and tanned skin. Though he is attractive in his own way, he can walk through the mall without one person staring. Undoubtedly, these two are complete opposites when it comes to looks.
The two guys are the best of friends but they are very different, even in the views on how they clean. Matt is very neat and tidy. Everything must be in its place at all times. Tuan on the other hand is extremely messy. Wherever things happen to land is where they should belong. Matt cleans his room at least once a day while Tuan's room is lucky to be cleaned once a month. When Matt cleans, it is a lengthy procedure. Sometimes he will spend hours just cleaning his room. When Tuan cleans, it is done as quickly as humanly possible. If he can get everything shoved under his bed in five minutes then he is happy. The thought of even sleeping in a messy room makes Matt extremely uncomfortable. In contrast, Tuan can't stand to be in a spotless room without the urge to mess something up.
Their views differ on sports also. Tuan will come up with any excuse possible to get out of going to a super bowl party. But if he has to go, he will cheer for the Redskin. He doesn't watch any sports on television or go to any games in person. When Tuan was in school, he never participated in any sports or rarely went to any of the games. On the other hand, Matt loves to watch basketball regularly. He is a loyal fan of Kobe Bryant who he thinks is a best basketball player among that sport. No matter how bad Kobe is playing, Matt will always cheer for him. When Matt was in school he participated in track and basketball; he also frequented the football games.
Since the two guys can hardly stand to be in each other's rooms, they frequently go out. But even in their choices of a good time, they have severe differences. Matt is very quiet and shy. He doesn't like to be around a lot of people that he doesn't know. Tuan on the contrary is loud and very outgoing. He loves being with new people, enjoys spending time with his friends, and doing new and exciting things. He hates the thought of doing the same thing over and over again. Matt's idea of a great weekend would be to stay at home with a few friends and watch movies while Tuan's fantasy weekend would include mountain climbing, swimming, or any thing where he met tons of new friends. Matt is the most shy around girls. In fact, he has never even been on a single date. Tuan is perhaps even more outgoing and always in a central attention.
They obvious difference is that Matt is Christian and Tuan is Buddhist. Their life styles and cultures are different. Matt is American but he came from a countryside. Tuan came from a big city in Vietnam. Matt grew up in a traditional Christian family. He would go to church and he had no brother or sister to look up to or to teach him except church fathers. His home was in a poor neighborhood. He was a good student all through his younger years and he was always involved in extracurricular activities. Then he figured that college was the key to getting where he wanted be. Tuan came from an Asian background where his parents always taught him about how to be a righteous man and a virtue heart. He had two younger sisters and one older brother and his family was rich. Although, the religions are different from Matt and Tuan, they share the same idea of being a good man.
Overall, they are two my best friends. Matt and Tuan almost have no similar point but huge differences from their appearances, their views on cleaning, their views on sports, their views on fun and their views on religion. Yet, they are both came from a different countries, opposite backgrounds and unconventional environments, they have been friends with me for four years from now and still in a good friendship. Friends come in all shapes and sizes and no two are alike. Even if they are different, they can bring out the best in each other.
You are repeating yourself in some points. For example, you have said that they are different in
"their appearances, their views on cleaning, their views on sports, their views on fun, and their views on religion. "
Many times over. If you insist on keeping that, try rephrasing a bit.
"how to be a righteous man and a virtue heart." ->
"how to be a righteous man and have a virtuous heart."
"where he met tons of new friends." ->
"where he can meet tons of new friends."
"he thinks is a best basketball player among that sport." ->
"he regards as the best basketball player in the world."
Overall, its a good essay. Straight to the point. Good job!
Those are my ideas if you want to take a look
Everyone has friends, and usually they are people from all walks of life.=>Everyone has friends, who may come from different places such as workplaces, schools, or parties.
Some are so different personalities. But some are similar that it is shocking=>Some have the same personalities while others are so different from one another.
They seem to walk, talk and even eat the same=> They may favor the same food or place
Others are so very different that it is absolute wonder that they can even stand each other, let alone be friends<=this is must be rewrite
That is how Matt and Tuan started out as best friends, but the two good friends found living together a bigger task than they had ever imagines.=>Matt and Tuan were best friends, but both of them realized that living together is a difficult...(if you're talking about the past and they are no longer be friends, use "they were best friends", if they are still be friends, use "they have+ PP" because the following paraghap you're saying "they are older than me", and "...they had ever imagines=>they have ever imagined=present perfect tense
His eyes are narrow and tanned skin (you mean his eyes are narrow and his eyes are tanned???, maybe you mean this=>His eyes are narrow and his skin is tanned
he can walk through the mall without one person staring=>Though he is attractive in his own way, no girl interests on his outside look when he is passing through the mall
The two guys are the best.. (don't use guy in formal writing, use man instead)
even in the views on how they clean (delete this part)
Tuan on the other hand is extremely messy.=>Tuan, on the other hand, is ex...(add commas)
The thought of even sleeping in a messy room makes Matt extremely uncomfortable (delete "The thought of even", just start with Sleeping in a...)
When Tuan was in school, he never participated in any sports =>When Tuan was in school, he had never participated (past perfect)
Friends come in all shapes and sizes <=this need rewrite, sound awkward
Compare and contrast is a common form of academic writing, either as an essay type on its own, or as part of a larger essay which includes one or more paragraphs which compare or contrast. This page gives information on what a compare and contrast essay is, how to structure this type of essay, how to use compare and contrast structure words, and how to make sure you use appropriate criteria for comparison/contrast. There is also an example compare and contrast essay on the topic of communication technology, as well as some exercises to help you practice this area.
What are compare & contrast essays?
To compare is to examine how things are similar, while to contrast is to see how they differ. A compare and contrast essay therefore looks at the similarities of two or more objects, and the differences. This essay type is common at university, where lecturers frequently test your understanding by asking you to compare and contrast two theories, two methods, two historical periods, two characters in a novel, etc. Sometimes the whole essay will compare and contrast, though sometimes the comparison or contrast may be only part of the essay. It is also possible, especially for short exam essays, that only the similarities or the differences, not both, will be discussed. See the examples below.
There are two main ways to structure a compare and contrast essay, namely using a block or a point-by-point structure. For the block structure, all of the information about one of the objects being compared/contrasted is given first, and all of the information about the other object is listed afterwards. This type of structure is similar to the block structure used for cause and effect and problem-solution essays. For the point-by-point structure, each similarity (or difference) for one object is followed immediately by the similarity (or difference) for the other. Both types of structure have their merits. The former is easier to write, while the latter is generally clearer as it ensures that the similarities/differences are more explicit.
The two types of structure, block and point-by-point, are shown in the diagram below.
Object 1 - Point 1
Object 1 - Point 2
Object 1 - Point 3
Object 2 - Point 1
Object 2 - Point 2
Object 2 - Point 3
Compare and Contrast Structure Words
Compare and contrast structure words are transition signals which show the similarities or differences. Below are some common examples.
Criteria for comparison/contrast
When making comparisons or contrasts, it is important to be clear what criteria you are using. Study the following example, which contrasts two people. Here the criteria are unclear.
Although this sentence has a contrast transition, the criteria for contrasting are not the same. The criteria used for Aaron are height (tall) and strength (strong). We would expect similar criteria to be used for Bruce (maybe he is short and weak), but instead we have new criteria, namely appearance (handsome) and intelligence (intelligent). This is a common mistake for students when writing this type of paragraph or essay. Compare the following, which has much clearer criteria (contrast structure words shown in bold).
Below is a compare and contrast essay. This essay uses the point-by-point structure. Click on the different areas (in the shaded boxes to the right) to highlight the different structural aspects in this essay, i.e. similarities, differences, and structure words. This will highlight not simply the paragraphs, but also the thesis statement and summary, as these repeat the comparisons and contrasts contained in the main body.
Title: There have been many advances in technology over the past fifty years. These have revolutionised the way we communicate with people who are far away. Compare and contrast methods of communication used today with those which were used in the past.
Before the advent of computers and modern technology, people communicating over long distances used traditional means such as letters and the telephone. Nowadays we have a vast array of communication tools which can complete this task, ranging from email to instant messaging and video calls. While the present and previous means of communication are similar in their general form, they differ in regard to their speed and the range of tools available.
One similarity between current and previous methods of communication relates to the form of communication. In the past, both written forms such as letters were frequently used, in addition to oral forms such as telephone calls. Similarly, people nowadays use both of these forms. Just as in the past, written forms of communication are prevalent, for example via email and text messaging. In addition, oral forms are still used, including the telephone, mobile phone, and voice messages via instant messaging services.
However, there are clearly many differences in the way we communicate over long distances, the most notable of which is speed. This is most evident in relation to written forms of communication. In the past, letters would take days to arrive at their destination. In contrast, an email arrives almost instantaneously and can be read seconds after it was sent. In the past, if it was necessary to send a short message, for example at work, a memo could be passed around the office, which would take some time to circulate. This is different from the current situation, in which a text message can be sent immediately.
Another significant difference is the range of communication methods. Fifty years ago, the tools available for communicating over long distances were primarily the telephone and the letter. By comparison, there are a vast array of communication methods available today. These include not only the telephone, letter, email and text messages already mentioned, but also video conferences via software such as Skype or mobile phone apps such as Wechat, and social media such as Facebook and Twitter.
In conclusion, methods of communication have greatly advanced over the past fifty years. While there are some similarities, such as the forms of communication, there are significant differences, chiefly in relation to the speed of communication and the range of communication tools available. There is no doubt that technology will continue to progress in future, and the advanced tools which we use today may one day also become outdated.
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